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Two roti extra please

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shared Dec 2, 2016 in Short Story by kabir_26490
“Mom, two roti more I need today in my lunch box”, bunty said to his mom as she was packing lunch box for him. Mom being nice and kind she added two rotis more to his lunch box.

Next day again bunty said, Mom two roti more I want. This happened daily and now Mom was also surprised to know why bunty is asking for two roti daily. 2 roti are enough for him and another two so it four, my child can’t be that hungry, Mom thought.

Mom(being suspicious) tried to figure out herself. So she followed bunty on way to school and what she noticed was surprising to her eyes.

Bunty while walking towards school he stopped at a cross road, he opened his lunchbox and offered two roti to the poor lady who was having an infant in her hand.

Bunty’s mom saw this and decided to talk to bunty after school.

“Bunty, come here beta I want to talk to you,” Yes mumma,said bunty.

Bunty, I saw you today that you gave your two rotis to the lady with baby in her hand, do you give her daily?, bunty being sad that mumma would scold, he said, “sorry mumma, I gave because she has a baby and lady was unable to find food for herself, if she is hungry and not able to find food how will the baby have food.”

Bunty further said,”I know little baby needs food from mother I learn in school and that mother of that child was poor,not having food so I gave her two rotis”

Listening this, Bunty’s mother added more happiness and use to give him one more lunch box that he can offer to that lady with baby.

Kids are actually innocent and pure at heart.
commented Dec 2, 2016 by Ritika gusaiwal
thats also a nice...wali story...
commented Dec 2, 2016 by Ashwani
very nice .....
commented Dec 2, 2016 by kabir_26490
Shukrya Ritika
commented Dec 2, 2016 by kabir_26490
Thanks Ashwani
commented Dec 2, 2016 by gurjyot_singh
nice story, you write very well... :)
commented Dec 2, 2016 by Nazneen Khan
Awesome....very beautiful story
commented Dec 2, 2016 by kabir_26490
Thanks Gurjyot and Nazneen
commented Dec 3, 2016 by Priya Batra
very nice Kabir! Keep going
commented Dec 3, 2016 by kabir_26490
Thanks Priya, Yes sure

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