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Garba Time

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shared Dec 2, 2016 in Short Story by kabir_26490
It was SUNBURN festival in Gujarat, which is known as Navratri.

There was garba organized by college in their own ground for 2 days.

During Garba nights, girls look fascinating, charming, divine,enticing, elegant and lots more in traditional attire with all other traditional accessories.

On 1st Day, group of S.Y B.com were playing garba (Garba is played in round form), in that the freshers of First year girls joined in as the garba was played with easy steps and loud enthusiasm.

Guy from S.Y. B.Com Kabir was playing while making an eye contact with First year girl, Kabir was playing while he locked his eyes on her, slowly slowly his lips spread and there was shy smile on his face,

Same was being acknowledged by the girl.

After Garba all enjoyed having chit chat and made WhatsApp group so they can gather around tomorrow. All of them introduced themselves on Garba group yet not known with names as DP were different.

Second day, kabir was anxiously waiting for her, and there she enters with Orange chaniya choli, Kajal, ornaments on neck, Small red bindi on her forehead was like cherry on cake.

Eyes were connected and this time the girl smiled first and kabir also acknowledged her smile.

Garba was going on and as few minutes were left Garba was turned into DJ so all people were dancing in group and enjoying the time, lastly the DJ played a couple song “Pehla nasha pehla khumar..”

All decided to dance in couple, kabir being shy didn’t approached her so he danced few steps with one of his classmate, prachi,

As all departed kabir said good bye and did a formal hand shake, “Hi, Kabir”

“Leena ” She replied with a smile

Night as kabir reached home, he got whatsapp from her number, HI

Kabir, “Hi, you did garba well”

Leena,”Well your couple dance was better then my garba”

Kabir “I wish we were couple, So I can dance with you”

Leena,”Let that wish come true then”


That night talks turned to morning and a new Navratri relationship was born,
commented Dec 2, 2016 by Ritika gusaiwal
so sweet
so loving......
loved it
commented Dec 2, 2016 by Ashwani
its beautiful keep writing .
commented Dec 2, 2016 by kabir_26490
Thank you for your comment,
commented Dec 3, 2016 by Priya Batra
very well written....
commented Dec 3, 2016 by kabir_26490
Thanks Priya

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