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Iss qadar mai anjuman se terey ruswa ho ke nikla;
Pur-musarrat aaya tha mai par fasurda ho ke nikla;

Bazm mai aaye thai shirkat karne hum bhi ba-jamaat;
Iss qadar ruswa hua aakhir mai tanha ho ke nikla;

Ek tamanna thi panaah-e-ishq mai aaney ki teri;
Iss qadar ghaarat hua ke be-tamanna ho ke nikla;

Baarha kartey rahey tum waar yu teer-e-nazar se;
Kya kahu yaaro mai toh zakhmi saraapa ho ke nikla;

Beh raha tha ashk ka daryaa nigaaho se musalsal;
Kya kahu aye humnafas tab bhi mai pyasa ho ke nikla;

Haisiyat gard-e-zameeN ke bhi baraabar na thi pehle;
Ab gaya jiss bazm mai mauzu-e-charcha ho ke nikla;

Kya kahu teer-e-nazar kha kar bhi ye fitrat na badli;
Ishq ka maara mujahid tera shaida ho ke nikla;


Few meanings

Anjuman= association/gathering/bazm
Pur-musarrat= happily
Fasurda= dejected/mournful
Ba-jamaat= with a group
Ghaarat= plundered
Baarha= many times/again & again
Saraapa= from head to foot
Musalsal= continous
Humnafas= lover/companion
Gard-e-zameeN= dust of the surface
Mauzu-e-charcha= debatable topic
Mujahid= pen name
Shaida= maverick
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You have wrote nice piece..I tried..only to reply..
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nicely composed

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Ruswai na di tanhai na di..
muskurah ke siwaye, bewfai na di..

pur-musarrat me thi mai tere sath..par gya tu akle begaini raho par..
kasoor mera maine koi safai nai di..

fasurda,tanhai me kati maine v rate..ba-jamaat kv mere darwaje pe dikhai na di..

baarha dekh teri raho ko..
saraapa..musalsal duwaye ki..

mere Humnafas shi kha nazar-e-isk na badla,mera..

kyo ki thi mai tere gard-e-zameen
kavi apni mohbat se bewfai na ki..;-)
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Bohat achha jawaab hai aapka Amit bhai
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thank you bhai..par apka gazal wakai khubsurt hai..

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