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Dayar-e-gher me kya lag gaya dil tera,
Ghar ke jo tujhe yaad nahe ayee, 

Chor gaya jab se tu des ko apne, 
Sawan to aye par barsaat nahe ayee,

Sookhe patto par girte he rahe aansoo,
Patjhar buhat aye par bahar nahe ayee,

Kehte the likh bhejoge tum hal-e-dil apna ,
Qasid bade aye par khabar nahe ayee,

Dayar-e-gher me kya lag gaya dil tera,
Ghar ke jo tujhe yaad nahe ayee,

Jaagte he rahen tere yaad me ankhen, 
Khawab bade aye par neend nahe ayee,

Taqte rahe hum to tere ishq ka asmaan,
Chand to aye par Eid nahe ayee,

Dhondte rahe tujh ko bhare bher me lekin,
Aaks buhat aye par deed nahe ayee,

Dayar-e-gher me kya lag gaya dil tera,
Ghar ke jo tujhe yaad nahe ayee,

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Really amazing work
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Thank u sir...stay blessed
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Kya baat hai.. god bless..
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wahhhhh bahut he achhi koshish ....   keep it up


MaiN Roz apnii nayii chaal aise chalta huN
Khushi kii raah ko dard meN badalta huN
Dayar e gam se behtar kahiiN khumaar nahiiN
Hamare Gam pe teraa koii ikhteyaar nahiN

Armaan
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Amazing peice.

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Paraayein lagne lage tujhe apne aaj kyun,
mann tera udd chalaa hai panchhi jaisa,
Dayar-e-gher me kya lag gaya dil tera,
Ghar ke jo tujhe yaad nahi aayi.

Koyal ke bachche jaise sadaa,
badhte hain kauaa ke ghonsle mein,
par tu toh tha khoon apna,
fir kyun chal diya ujaalon se andhere mein.
Dayar-e-gher me kya lag gaya dil tera,
Ghar ke jo tujhe yaad nahi aayi.

Fir ek din lautega tu,
aas pakdaa baithaa hai koi,
aane se teri raat khatm hogi,
aayegi jo subah ek nayi.

Subah ka bhulaa shaam ko ghar lauta,
par kahenge kuch log fir bhi,
Dayar-e-gher me kya lag gaya dil tera,
Ghar ke jo tujhe yaad nahi aayi.
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Its so nice satya :) stay blessed...
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nicely done @Satyananda Sarangi... :)
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Thank you for writing so [email protected] Pakeeza
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beautifully done :)
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Always welcome satya :)
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Excellent reply Satya.. Two great poems in tandem..
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Nayi Nayi Usne Khushiya Thi Paayi..
Na Jaana Pichhe Kya Chiz Gawaayin..
Kho Gaya Wo Aisi Madhoshio Me..
Nahi Suna Ke Tu Chikhi Chillaayi..

Sawan, Patzar Mausam The Tere Liye..
Uske Aangan To Bahaar Hi Aaayi..
Tu Rahi Intezaar Me Deedar E Chaand Ki..
Aur Usne Har Raat Eid Manaayi..

Tadapti Rahi Tu Haal E Dil Jaanne Ko..
Ashqo Ki Nadiyaan Palko Me Chhupaai..
Bekhabar Tha Wo Ya BeParwaah Tha..
Tu Maasum Si Ladki, Wo Nikla Harjaai..

Bin Uske Ghar Me Chhayi Tanhaayi..
Yahi Baat Uske Samaz Me Na Aayi..
Isliye Lag Gaya Dil Uska Dayar-E-Gher Me,
Aur Ghar Ki Use Yaad Nahin Aayi.. !!

"J"
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Roshan  naa karo abhi iss jahaan ko,
Ke jo har shaam tujhe andhere me dekk ke kaati hai,


Roshan  naa karo abhi iss jahaan ko,
Ke jo har shaam tujhe andhere me dekk ke kaati hai,

Hum to wahin the, wahin hain, wahin rahenge,
Bas tera aana baaki hai,

Chhodo jao maan liya, tu zamaane pe chalta hai,
Chhodo jao maan liya, tu zamaane pe chalta hai,
Zamaana bhi to par kabhi apna tha,
Yaad hai, tu aur main sath sajde kiya karte the,
To kya hua jo majhab badal gaya,

To kya hua jo majhab badal gaya,
Mausamon ke aane ka maksad badal gaya,
Hum mausam nahi, tujhe dekha karte the,
Kya hua jo tera wo rab badal gaya,

Be-adab hokar bhi tujhe adab se dekhte hain,
Kya tere liye itna naa-kaafi hai,

Roshan  naa karo abhi iss jahaan ko,
Ke jo har shaam tujhe andhere me dekk ke kaati hai,


Hum to wahin the, wahin hain, wahin rahenge,
Bas tera aana baaki hai,


Bas............................... aana baaki hai..

Bas .................................... tera.......

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